Understanding Poetry: Steps 1 through 3
Step 1: Understand what a sentence is and the ways in which a sentence ends or is incomplete.
(You’d think this is obvious, but I can’t tell you how many readers get hung up on this step.)
Step 2: Realize that in poetry, the sentence may be part of a line, the whole line, more than a line, and perhaps several lines.
If the sentence stops within the line, this is called caesura.
End stop means the sentence ends at the line’s conclusion.
If the sentence goes on despite the line ending, this is called run on or enjambment.
IMPORTANT NOTE: Many poets practice the convention of capitalizing the first letter of each line regardless of whether this begins a new sentence. In my opinion, this worst of grammatical conventions confuses so many young readers. Be aware that in poetry capitalization does not necessarily indicate a new thought has begun.
Step 3: Apprehend whether the poem is a sense or a non-sense poem. (sic)
A sense poem is attempting to convey meaning to you in a more-or-less conventional form, such as a narrative or exposition. More on this later.
A non-sense poem may hint at sentences, but is not understandable in a conventional sense. A non-sense poem might play on shape or sound or an enigmatic hint at clear meaning.
Some examples of non-sense:
r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r |
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| E.E. Cummings | ||
r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r who a)s w(e loo)k upnowgath PPEGORHRASS eringint(o- aThe):l eA !p: S a (r rIvInG .gRrEaPsPhOs) to rea(be)rran(com)gi(e)ngly ,grasshopper; |
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Cummings is using the placement of letters to convey the skittish, wild hopping of the insect, but there is no sentence to this. We don’t attempt to elicit a meaning from this in the usual way. There is no message or moral.
Some poems hint at sentence structure, but again, sense does not appear to be the poet’s goal. Here, Louis Zukofsky translates Catullus not to bring the meaning into English, but to capture the song-like quality of the original Latin:
Catullus
Poem 41
Ameana pulling, a foot touted high,
touched me for all of ten thousand, and popped scut
is the tour-pickled, low-puling long nosed, ah
decocted heiress of the milked Formiani.
Propinquity, quick buss this fuel, cure eye,
amigos, medicos, call convocations:
no nest, she is nuts, pulls her neck, rogue harried,
what lies sit solid ice imagine o some.
As a rule, AP students are not likely to see non-sense poems as any major part of the examination. This doesn’t mean unconventional poetry has no worth and is to be glossed over: it means you apply a different lens.
Remember, the essential question is “What diction/tone/figures of speech does the author use to convey meaning?” We will spend many hours on this.
You’re missing the point: Long-term potentiation
I get steamed when colleagues insist that “the information is all on the student’s smart phone: why do we teach just the information?” I get the point. But.
When you fall down and hurt yourself, I run up to you and I start the primary assessment. When that is complete, I start a secondary assessment. If there are more of you hurt, I start to triage.
What I am not doing is looking things up on my smartphone. You get me?
What are the basics that need to be in the long-term memory?
(I am dismayed by the amount of high school seniors who can neither write a sentence, nor define a sentence, nor understand a sentence: how the hell did they make it to my threshold?)
The Sentence: The thought completes and ends.
Sentence: A complete thought, usually sayable in one breath.
When you say a sentence, it is of four purposes:
Declarative asserts truth or falsehood.
Interrogative asks for truth or falsehood.
Imperative commands or requests.
Optative wishes for the non-existent.
(Some argue that the exclamatory is a purpose, but note that you can speak any of the sentences plainly or with force.)
The sentence ends in three ways:
Period. Question mark? Exclamation mark!
(In this age of slapping down punctuations with no regard for rules, do not think this is an unnecessary review.)
The sentence is left incomplete in two ways:
The long dash interrupts thought.
The ellipses leaves the thought purposefully.
If you would like, you can teach this with two fists raised, and make one hand the sentence purpose/type, and the other hand the ways to end the sentence. Five and five. See it?
Repetitio est mater studiorum
Repetition is the mother of learning.
Teaching philosophy: Simplify, memorize, apply.
I come from a background of training in organizations in which one is called upon to recall information and complete tasks during stressful conditions. The EMT uses acronyms and abbreviations such as AVPU and APAIL in order to run through a memorized checklist and efficiently classify the patient’s condition. The infantry soldier likewise uses training standards such as SPORTS to clear a weapons stoppage under fire.
In English, I try to simplify the processes and definitions into memorizable units, which I ask the students to master by rote. Then we apply.
Repetitio est mater studiorum: Repetition is the mother of learning.
(In the classroom, I demonstrate the techniques and standards as they are taught, adding the elements of the physical, the choreography of it: this is one reason why the teacher and the classroom are crucial, and simply reading my blog is an incomplete experience.)
An abundance of poetic forms
Here’s a list of poetry type by ethnicity/nationality.
These are described in excellent book Shapes of Our Singing by Robin Skelton. The purpose of this post is to support the fact that almost every culture has a rich tradition of poetics.
If you know of another form, please comment.
Anglo-Saxon
Alliterative verse a la Eduard Sievers
Hazaj
Mutaquarib
Qasidah in the Basit
Rajaz
Sari
Tawil
Urjuzah
Wafir
Payar
Tripadi
Octosyllabic couplets
Merriam-Webster online
Another solid choice.
The editor videos can be quite interesting.
The Oxford, online
My dictionary of choice is the Oxford English Dictionary, but the official dictionary fills a bookcase — but is now out of print. This online version is ad-heavy, but handy.
(Apple users have a version of the dictionary in their dock.)
Wisdom
“It’s not wise to violate rules until you know how to observe them.”
– T.S. Eliot, interview with The Paris Review (Issue 21, 1959)
Wisdom
A danger foreseen is half avoided.
–Tsistsistas (Cheyenne) saying.